Living in a village
One morning, when the sun rise, the fields and woods is bathed in a golden light, countless sparrows wake up and twitter in the eaves. Everyone do their everyday farming works. that is life in village, it is very beautiful and peaceful . therefore, living there always makes people more optimistic and happier. Especially, life in village is the best condition to the people want to repose in old age.
In fact, the old always are in delicate health so, they need quiet environment and a fresh air to take a rest and enjoy life in the old age. We know that the old is very weak both health and mind. They are always worried and very sensitive with everything around them. They want to live in peaceful place with their relatives and indulge in the pleasure of countryside. The noisy and complex of city is not suitable for them and contrarily, living in village will make them feel happier and more comfortable when they are growing old. Thus, we should look after more than to our parents, grandparents and make them happy with good conditions of life
When we want to find the good things to take care of our parents, grandparents, we will find that the wonderful and suitable conditions of village is the best choice for them. At first, the peace and quiet in village is very useful to their health. In addition, village doesn’t have a lot of traffic, so here isn’t noisy and complex like city. Second, in a village people do not live very close to one another. Their house are far apart and the space around, they usually plant flowers, fruit and vegetables or raise chickens, pigs…the old are able to enjoy the pleasure of the country life. Especially, some villages are surrounding by paddy- fields or mountain, there are also many streams and rivers in most villages. It is indeed a very good place for rest and relaxation. Last but not least, in the villages, the neighborly relationship is very important , so, the old are always concerned by the neighbor and that will make them fell be consoled when they can’t life nearly their child. Moreover, the country people are very friendly and helpful. The people here work together and live in peace whenever they celebrate festivals, parties… they always share to everyone. So, I think that, the life like that is very suitable and good for the old who want spend their old age peacefully.
In short, living in the village always brings to peace and tranquil state of mind and this is the best choice to the old who are tired of the complex and noisy in the city and want to repose in the old age.
Name: nguyen thuy truc quyen
Class: 081202a
Id: 08120117
Thứ Bảy, 24 tháng 10, 2009
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