OUTLINE Topic 4: women
Introduction: Some said that : women should be restricted to work connected with the home and children. They shouldn’t engage in politics, commerce or industry. Do you agree with this statement? It will have a lot of different answers, but in my opinion, I disagree completely with it. For centuries, women have to work connected with the house to bring increased freedom to the male population. It is very inequality because women and men have similar faculties and capacities, everything men can do, women can do, too. Therefore, there is no reason at all for women to have to do house work all day, all life, they have rights to engage in the, political, social activities to express their ability.
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Topic sentence: Women have sufficient faculties and necessary factors to get success : intelligent, clever and talented, they can finish well their house work and engage in political, social activities to serve human’s life.
_women have been struggled for a long time, and now, they have an important position in society.
+a lot of women become famous people and be admired in the world such as : Mrs. Hilary Clinton, Princess Diana…
_ women are very intelligent, there are woman scientists, engineers, doctors, lawyers, judges, politicians…of course, we can’t forget scientist Marie Curie, Vietnamese diplomat Ton Nu Thi Ninh…
_women has more duty than men so, they need more clever than to arrange and keep balance between house-keeping, rearing of children and political, commerce, industry and social activities
* nowadays, however, the struggle liberty and equality is still a difficult challenge to get over, men usually think that they are more intelligent, stronger than women and they tend to disparage women. In fact, that is inequality, so, women are trying to prove their abilities to everyone find that women are not only good at working connected with the home, but they can engage in politics, commerce, industry and get success like men
conclusion: in short, women have an important role, they have talent, faculties, and if they have a good chance to serve and express their abilities in political, social spheres, they will get many successes to serve to human. In the future, women will be more successful and independent to prove their talent.
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Thứ Bảy, 28 tháng 11, 2009
topic4
Women and the struggle of liberty and equality
Some said that : women should be restricted to work connected with the home and children. They shouldn’t engage in politics, commerce or industry. Do you agree with this statement? It will have a lot of different answers, but in my opinion, I disagree completely with it. For centuries, women have to work connected with the house to bring increased freedom to the male population. It is very inequality because women and men have similar faculties and capacities, what men can do, what women can do. Therefore, there is no reason at all for women to have to do house work all day, all life, they have rights to engage in the, political, social activities to express their abilities.
Women have sufficient faculties and necessary factors to get success : intelligent, clever and talented, they can finish well their house work and engage in political, social activities to serve human. For a long time, women have been struggled for their rights and now, they have a important position in society. A lot of women become famous people and be admired in the world such as : Mrs. Hilary Clinton, Princess Diana…we can see many, many other talented women and their achievements are recognized. That proves women are very intelligent, there are woman scientists, engineers, doctors, lawyers, judges, politicians…of course, we can’t forget scientist Marie Curie that is very talented woman and her work brought many benefits to human’s life. Women are not only intelligent, but also very clever, women has more duty than men so, they need more clever than to arrange and keep balance between house-keeping, rearing of children and political, commerce, industry and social activities. That is a difficult work, do you think they have sufficient faculties to finish all well? You can see their work, their achievements you will get the answer. Nowadays, however, the struggle of liberty and equality is still a difficult challenge to get over, men usually think that they are more intelligent, stronger than women and they tend to disparage women. In fact, that is inequality, so, women are trying to prove their abilities to everyone find that women are not only good at working connected with the home, but they can engage in politics, commerce, industry and get success like men.
In short, women have an important role, they have talent, faculties, and if they have a good chance to serve and express their abilities in political, social spheres, they will get many successes to serve to human. In the future, women will be more successful and independent to prove their talent.
Some said that : women should be restricted to work connected with the home and children. They shouldn’t engage in politics, commerce or industry. Do you agree with this statement? It will have a lot of different answers, but in my opinion, I disagree completely with it. For centuries, women have to work connected with the house to bring increased freedom to the male population. It is very inequality because women and men have similar faculties and capacities, what men can do, what women can do. Therefore, there is no reason at all for women to have to do house work all day, all life, they have rights to engage in the, political, social activities to express their abilities.
Women have sufficient faculties and necessary factors to get success : intelligent, clever and talented, they can finish well their house work and engage in political, social activities to serve human. For a long time, women have been struggled for their rights and now, they have a important position in society. A lot of women become famous people and be admired in the world such as : Mrs. Hilary Clinton, Princess Diana…we can see many, many other talented women and their achievements are recognized. That proves women are very intelligent, there are woman scientists, engineers, doctors, lawyers, judges, politicians…of course, we can’t forget scientist Marie Curie that is very talented woman and her work brought many benefits to human’s life. Women are not only intelligent, but also very clever, women has more duty than men so, they need more clever than to arrange and keep balance between house-keeping, rearing of children and political, commerce, industry and social activities. That is a difficult work, do you think they have sufficient faculties to finish all well? You can see their work, their achievements you will get the answer. Nowadays, however, the struggle of liberty and equality is still a difficult challenge to get over, men usually think that they are more intelligent, stronger than women and they tend to disparage women. In fact, that is inequality, so, women are trying to prove their abilities to everyone find that women are not only good at working connected with the home, but they can engage in politics, commerce, industry and get success like men.
In short, women have an important role, they have talent, faculties, and if they have a good chance to serve and express their abilities in political, social spheres, they will get many successes to serve to human. In the future, women will be more successful and independent to prove their talent.
Thứ Sáu, 27 tháng 11, 2009
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Outline topic3
Introduction: I had bad experience with a dog when I was ten. That was the time my family moved to new place in village, near my new house is a beautiful house where the old woman and a big dog lived. Her house had a big apple tree and it bore rich fruit. It looked like very delicious and sweet. At that time, I really wanted to be eaten them but I didn’t know the way to get that. At last, I decided a reckless deed is that stealing apples and because of that silly decision I met that dog and he gave me a lesson , a bad memory which I will never forget it.
Body:
_ after having lunch, I carried out my plan : +closed in the fence, climbed up into inside
+ climbed and reached a branch and picked a fruit
_ then, I heard the dog’s voice, he was snorting and barking
_ I cried a lot for a long time
_the hostess came back and saved me
conclusion: After soothing me into obedience, she took me to go back home, she was very gentle and tolerant because she didn’t abuse me and forgave my mistake. But my mother was very angry and she punished me by beating. Now, when I look back I still feel scare dog because dog gave me an unforgettable lesson, that was really my bad memory in my childhood.
Introduction: I had bad experience with a dog when I was ten. That was the time my family moved to new place in village, near my new house is a beautiful house where the old woman and a big dog lived. Her house had a big apple tree and it bore rich fruit. It looked like very delicious and sweet. At that time, I really wanted to be eaten them but I didn’t know the way to get that. At last, I decided a reckless deed is that stealing apples and because of that silly decision I met that dog and he gave me a lesson , a bad memory which I will never forget it.
Body:
_ after having lunch, I carried out my plan : +closed in the fence, climbed up into inside
+ climbed and reached a branch and picked a fruit
_ then, I heard the dog’s voice, he was snorting and barking
_ I cried a lot for a long time
_the hostess came back and saved me
conclusion: After soothing me into obedience, she took me to go back home, she was very gentle and tolerant because she didn’t abuse me and forgave my mistake. But my mother was very angry and she punished me by beating. Now, when I look back I still feel scare dog because dog gave me an unforgettable lesson, that was really my bad memory in my childhood.
topic3
My bad memory
I had a bad experience with a dog when I was ten. That was the time my family moved to a new place in village, near my house is a beautiful house where an old woman and a big dog lived. Her house had a big apple tree and it bears rich fruit. It looked like very sweet and delicious. At that time, I really wanted to be eaten them but I didn’t know the way to get that. At last, I decided a reckless deed is that stealing apples and because of that silly decision, I met that dog and he gave me a lesson, a bad memory which all my life, I never forget it.
One day, the old woman wasn’t at home, I thought this was a good chance to carry out my plan. After having lunch, while everyone in my family was taking a rest, I closed in the fence, climbed up into inside easily, the conspicuous apple was really beautiful and attractive. I climbed and reached a branch and picked fruits. I ate one by one with relish. Suddenly, I heard a strange sound under the tree and I was really scary when I found that it is the dog’s voice. He was snorting and looking at me with furious eyes. I didn’t know what to do. I seemed motionless until he barked noisily, I began burst into tears. I still remembered that I cried a long time on the tree until the hostess came back and saved me from that dog.
After soothing me into obedience, she took me to go back home, she was very gentle and tolerant because she didn’t abuse me and forgave my mistake. But my mother was very angry and she punished me by beating. Now, when I look back I still feel scare dog because dog gave me an unforgettable lesson, that was really my bad memory in my childhood.
I had a bad experience with a dog when I was ten. That was the time my family moved to a new place in village, near my house is a beautiful house where an old woman and a big dog lived. Her house had a big apple tree and it bears rich fruit. It looked like very sweet and delicious. At that time, I really wanted to be eaten them but I didn’t know the way to get that. At last, I decided a reckless deed is that stealing apples and because of that silly decision, I met that dog and he gave me a lesson, a bad memory which all my life, I never forget it.
One day, the old woman wasn’t at home, I thought this was a good chance to carry out my plan. After having lunch, while everyone in my family was taking a rest, I closed in the fence, climbed up into inside easily, the conspicuous apple was really beautiful and attractive. I climbed and reached a branch and picked fruits. I ate one by one with relish. Suddenly, I heard a strange sound under the tree and I was really scary when I found that it is the dog’s voice. He was snorting and looking at me with furious eyes. I didn’t know what to do. I seemed motionless until he barked noisily, I began burst into tears. I still remembered that I cried a long time on the tree until the hostess came back and saved me from that dog.
After soothing me into obedience, she took me to go back home, she was very gentle and tolerant because she didn’t abuse me and forgave my mistake. But my mother was very angry and she punished me by beating. Now, when I look back I still feel scare dog because dog gave me an unforgettable lesson, that was really my bad memory in my childhood.
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