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Thứ Sáu, 27 tháng 11, 2009

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Introduction: I had bad experience with a dog when I was ten. That was the time my family moved to new place in village, near my new house is a beautiful house where the old woman and a big dog lived. Her house had a big apple tree and it bore rich fruit. It looked like very delicious and sweet. At that time, I really wanted to be eaten them but I didn’t know the way to get that. At last, I decided a reckless deed is that stealing apples and because of that silly decision I met that dog and he gave me a lesson , a bad memory which I will never forget it.
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_ after having lunch, I carried out my plan : +closed in the fence, climbed up into inside
+ climbed and reached a branch and picked a fruit
_ then, I heard the dog’s voice, he was snorting and barking
_ I cried a lot for a long time
_the hostess came back and saved me
conclusion: After soothing me into obedience, she took me to go back home, she was very gentle and tolerant because she didn’t abuse me and forgave my mistake. But my mother was very angry and she punished me by beating. Now, when I look back I still feel scare dog because dog gave me an unforgettable lesson, that was really my bad memory in my childhood.

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