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OUTLINE Topic 4: women
Introduction: Some said that : women should be restricted to work connected with the home and children. They shouldn’t engage in politics, commerce or industry. Do you agree with this statement? It will have a lot of different answers, but in my opinion, I disagree completely with it. For centuries, women have to work connected with the house to bring increased freedom to the male population. It is very inequality because women and men have similar faculties and capacities, everything men can do, women can do, too. Therefore, there is no reason at all for women to have to do house work all day, all life, they have rights to engage in the, political, social activities to express their ability.
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Topic sentence: Women have sufficient faculties and necessary factors to get success : intelligent, clever and talented, they can finish well their house work and engage in political, social activities to serve human’s life.
_women have been struggled for a long time, and now, they have an important position in society.
+a lot of women become famous people and be admired in the world such as : Mrs. Hilary Clinton, Princess Diana…
_ women are very intelligent, there are woman scientists, engineers, doctors, lawyers, judges, politicians…of course, we can’t forget scientist Marie Curie, Vietnamese diplomat Ton Nu Thi Ninh…
_women has more duty than men so, they need more clever than to arrange and keep balance between house-keeping, rearing of children and political, commerce, industry and social activities
* nowadays, however, the struggle liberty and equality is still a difficult challenge to get over, men usually think that they are more intelligent, stronger than women and they tend to disparage women. In fact, that is inequality, so, women are trying to prove their abilities to everyone find that women are not only good at working connected with the home, but they can engage in politics, commerce, industry and get success like men
conclusion: in short, women have an important role, they have talent, faculties, and if they have a good chance to serve and express their abilities in political, social spheres, they will get many successes to serve to human. In the future, women will be more successful and independent to prove their talent.